My shorty Ed :p

Well here is my 3rd manga/anime drawing (but the 1st with body) and I'm not happy with it. I'm really sad because I spent so many time with it!! And became this shitty drawing

I want to improve so please comment

The only material used was a pencil (my school pencil ) and a black pencil (O_o is not the right word isn't it?! sorry :/)